'young Hodge the Drummer never knew'
- emphasises how young and naive he was
'fresh from his Wessex home'
- again suggesting his age and youth
'broad karoo'
- mixed register as in a different language
'the dusty loam'
- contrasts with 'fresh'
'strange stares amid the gloam'
- suggests his unfamiliarity
- emphasises his death lying on ground looking up at stars
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