This was quite difficult to read, and once you could read it (after changing the colours), it made no sense at all! You basically just explained what the question meant, rather than gave us tips on what to do. Maybe use less colour and less sentences that waffle!
Yeah, i agree with Molly. Maybe next time you should do an exampler essay??? You should actually try and explain what to do rather than just analyse and break down the question. Thanks for trying anyway...
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